留学生个人陈述有什么技巧及范文

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　　1.个人陈述的基本结构。个人陈述主要包含三大块内容。第一，开头，这部分是对自己基本情况的介绍。第二，中间部分，该部分主要又分为四小部分，一是对自己工作经验的介绍；二是对自己的爱好、特长及获得的荣誉进行介绍；三是介绍自己申请留学的原因，未来的学习计划、想要学习的专业方向等；四是对自己学习完成后工作计划的介绍。第三，结尾，该部分需要强调下自己申请留学的强烈愿望。

　　2.个人陈述需要注意的技巧。第一，避免撒谎。一定要避免撒谎，不管是家庭条件还是学习背景，都要保证其真实性，你可以凭借自己的能力把普通的经历写的精彩，但一定不可撒谎，一旦老师发现撒谎现象，其必然会对你的个人陈述，甚至你个人产生不好的印象。第二，避免过于华丽的辞藻。提高个人陈述的丰富性、精彩性当然无可厚非，但是若用词过于华丽、生僻往往会适得其反。比说说，为了表现自己词汇的丰富，在写作中利用“utilize”这个词替代“use”，往往会给老师一种哗众取宠的感觉。所以，写个人陈述时一定要谨记“ Don’t use a 10-cent word when a five-cent word will do.”第三，避免打官腔。想必很多留学生都认为个人陈述中所描述的自己似乎和真是存在的自己存在较大的偏差，在写作期间往往会不由自主的打起官腔。比如说，通常情况下你可能会用“Her style of persuasion…”来表述，但写个人陈述的时候就会不自觉的写“The indication of her rhetorical strategy…”。显然后者听起来更加的官方。当然，不让你打官腔也不是说你就可以随意的使用网络语言，这也是需要注意的。第四，不要用鸡毛蒜皮的小事证明大道理。写个人陈述的时候可以从小事着手，但一定要避免写鸡毛蒜皮的消失。比如说，你想要证明自己是个努力的人，你可以写自己去做家庭教师，但一定不要写帮爸妈做家务。第五，不要罗列自己的成就。写个人陈述时一定要避免罗列自己的成就，个人陈述字数本身就不多，且自己获得的荣誉已经在简历上进行了表述就无需进行重复了，过于重复自己的成就、荣誉往往会起到适得其反的效果。

　　附：酒店管理专业个人陈述范文

　　Engaged in hotel and catering business has been my dream for a long time. I have been thinking privately to choose my favorite major in high school and it is also my motivation to study. Travelling and tasting delicacies have always been my two great hobbies, and I have constantly fantasized how wonderful it will be to combine the work and life in the future with my interests and hobbies. So I choose Tourism Management (biasing towards hotel management) as my major in university.

　　The learning contents of my major are more comprehensive, which makes me able to contact much knowledge in related fields. Such studies have made me benefit a lot, understand the knowledge related to the tourism industry and the catering industry more comprehensively, and have a solid foundation and good capacity and further specify the direction of my development-hotel management in the course of continuous learning improvement. With a goal in mind, I have been trying to do well in each step after entering university and reasonably arrange my study and life. At the same time of learning professional knowledge with great efforts and maintaining good grades, I have actively joined the school club activities, organized and participated in various school activities and public-service activities (AIDS Day publicity, care for the children left behind, etc.), and established the “Association for Learning” with several excellent students, which is an organization providing services for students who take part in the entrance exams for postgraduate schools, graded examinations and English studies, etc. The association was awarded The 10 Best College Associations by Chengdu Youth League in 2009. I have ever served as: Vice Minister of the Department of Culture and Sports of the school Student Apartment Management Committee, Minister of the school “Association for Learning”, Director of the Secretary Department of the school Psychological Development Association; obtained the scholarship and won the title of “Excellent Student Cadre” during the 2007/2008 academic year. The full life and good professional basis in the first and second college life have not only made me mature, enhanced my social skills, but also increased my confidence in the future study. The specialized courses and common basic courses in the third year have started to add some practical courses, which have given me more opportunities of extracurricular practice, trained my ability to combine theory and practice and let me better apply the knowledge into the practice.

　　It seems to me that Hotel Management is definitely a good choice. The rapid take-off of the Chinese economy and the rising living standard of the people have promoted the constant development of the tourism industry, and its development speed and potential can not be ignored. Therefore, I have always been full of confidence in the tourism industry and the related catering industry. The college I study in has education cooperation with Perth Institute of Tourism and

　　Hospitality and the combination of Chinese and Australian teaching method lets me learn a lot of specialized knowledge, while in the course of study, I have not only found that there is still a certain gas between our school’s education quality of the major and the internationally advanced level, but also discovered the advantage of foreign education and the advancement and perfection of their hospitality industry. So I determine to go abroad for further studies. Your school’s learning environment and education quality are what I have dreamed of and I have been paying attention to the situation and development of your school, especially the information about the major of hospitality. I hope I can study in your school and then return home to fulfill my dream after successful graduation, to start a restaurant of my own characteristics. I also hope your school, which I am quite satisfied with and longing for, can give me an opportunity to pursue further education, and I will appreciate very much.

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